oh, i love this, what an unexpected last line! she laughs. she does, doesn't she? wonderful!
She must feel the spring alive under foot.
Ohh nice! Wonderful :-)
I like the contrast between somber Earth and her laugh ....
This is beautiful! I love the twist at the end.
Beautiful... I love your pictures.
I love how you made the Earth seem sentient. Very beautiful!
..like a glitter card ;)
Lovely! You composed it in perfect cinquain form, nature image and all :)
Lovely turn at the end ~ Brrr...its cold here ~
I love the way this ends "she laughs"...
awesome natural beauty....as usual you capture it perfectly..:) love the glistening, sparkles of reflective light...even in the small things...beauty prevails.
Oh, this is beautiful!I love your ending~"she laughs"....fun!;D
She laughs...unexpected. I love it. Gorgeous cinquain.
i enjoyed the last line too..so well done..